Thursday, December 16, 2010

In the wee hours of morning

It stood tall with might
The day broke, bringing in light
Gushes of air engulfing me
As I stood underneath the pine tree

The day broke , brining in light
Birds chirping melodiously
As I stood underneath the pine tree
Imbibing the composure and serenity

Birds chirping melodiously
Ending the silence of the night
Imbibing the composure and serenity
Embellishing the day, now active and bright

8 comments:

  1. Hey vatsu,

    Very nice poem.
    I just read all your posts and you Really write well !!
    Meine realise nahi kara tha ki mera baby boat kitna bada hogaya hai.
    Personally I prefer the personal posts to the political ones.
    Have you thought about becoming a writer ?

    Keep it up
    Love
    Didi

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  2. Nice pantoum poem!!!!
    *wink*

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  3. @Didi: Thank you so much Didi! It is always an inspiration when our loved ones praise our work :) I'd written the political ones initially when I'd just started blogging and couldn't think of anything else. These were like the burning topics here at that time.
    The personal one is a little closer to my heart than the others. And no, I have no plans of becoming an author, atleast for now.
    @Shubhra Didi: Oh my god!! How did you find out that it's a pantoum? :O :O
    @Neeha: Thank you so much :)

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  4. Beautiful!
    Im pleasantly surprised =)

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  5. The poem has great poetic beauty attached to it.
    especially the arrival of the birds , embues the setting with life and movement.

    I Like it =)

    -Radhika

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