It stood tall with might
The day broke, bringing in light
Gushes of air engulfing me
As I stood underneath the pine tree
The day broke , brining in light
Birds chirping melodiously
As I stood underneath the pine tree
Imbibing the composure and serenity
Birds chirping melodiously
Ending the silence of the night
Imbibing the composure and serenity
Embellishing the day, now active and bright
Hey vatsu,
ReplyDeleteVery nice poem.
I just read all your posts and you Really write well !!
Meine realise nahi kara tha ki mera baby boat kitna bada hogaya hai.
Personally I prefer the personal posts to the political ones.
Have you thought about becoming a writer ?
Keep it up
Love
Didi
Nice pantoum poem!!!!
ReplyDelete*wink*
Well penned...
ReplyDelete@Didi: Thank you so much Didi! It is always an inspiration when our loved ones praise our work :) I'd written the political ones initially when I'd just started blogging and couldn't think of anything else. These were like the burning topics here at that time.
ReplyDeleteThe personal one is a little closer to my heart than the others. And no, I have no plans of becoming an author, atleast for now.
@Shubhra Didi: Oh my god!! How did you find out that it's a pantoum? :O :O
@Neeha: Thank you so much :)
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteIm pleasantly surprised =)
i like it!!
ReplyDeletevery scenic :)
The poem has great poetic beauty attached to it.
ReplyDeleteespecially the arrival of the birds , embues the setting with life and movement.
I Like it =)
-Radhika
scenic beauty *
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